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Demon Light Maker

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Struggled with composition here but hope you like it!

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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

You should play with the values more, darken up the girls silhouette so that she stands out from the background. Maybe it is just a stylistic choice but the way she blends in isn't very interesting for the eye to look at.

Here it a quick edit pre03.deviantart.net/eb44/th/p…

Those tattoo like lights on her body could be placed better. And I'm not sure what the orange lights are in the background, but they make for a interesting light source and look alright. The piece is pretty simple and not so original but it's still lovely. I love the desaturated look hnngh your colour palettes make me happy.

Keep up the good arts :*